Shiv Pooja Mein Leen Rahe (Bhajan) music notations

[Chandran]

Dear Friends

Please try and revert back.

Scale : Ab Minor

Shiv Pooja

Shiv Pooja Mein Man Lein Rehe
BG#  F#E   D#-B ED# G#F# F#F#
Mera Masthak Ho  Aur Dwar Thera
A#A# A#BBG#   G#F# F#EF#G# G#G#
Shiv Pooja Mein Man Lein Rehe
BG#  F#E   D#-B ED# G#F# F#F#
Mera Masthak Ho  Aur Dwar Thera
A#A# A#BBG#   G#F# F#EF#G# G#G#
Mith   Jaye         Janmon    Ki  Trishna
G#BD#+ D#+E+D#+E+ C#+BA# D#+C#+BA# C#+ C#+C#+
Mil     Bole      Shankar Pyar    Thera
{D#+C#+}{D#+C#+B} A#AA    G#F#EF# G#G#
Pyar Thera
AF#E D#E  

Yu. Mujhe ko     Tera. Pyar  Mila
E   BB    BABC#+ AG#   F#EF# G#G#
Bejan    Ko. Jaise.    Jaan  Mili
G#G#AC#+ C#+ D#+C#+BA# C#+BB BB
Yu. Mujhe ko     Tera. Pyar  Mila
E   BB    BABC#+ AG#   F#EF# G#G#
Bejan    Ko. Jaise.    Jaan  Mili
G#G#AC#+ C#+ D#+C#+BA# C#+BB BB
Jis. Din se. Tujh. Ko. Jana Hai
G#A  C#+ C#+ AG#   A   AC#+ C#+B
Mujhe ko  Apni.   PehChan. Mili
G#A   C#+ D#+C#+B A#A#C#+B BB
De  Di.   Tune.  Charno    mein. Jagah
G#B E+D#+ D#+D#+ E+C#+BA#  C#+   C#+C#+
Abhari.          Hoon. Sau. Baar. Tera
{D#+C#}{D#+C#+B} A     G#   F#EF# G#G#
Sau Baar Tera.....
G#  AF#E D#E

I am not sure about the lyrics. If there any mistake, please rectify also provide the lyrics to complete the notes.

Regards
Alakkal Chandran Nair

 

[Sunil Kumar Bajaj]

Dear chandaran Sir
Notes seems perfect I will post lyrics
After trying myself the Bhajan.
In the meantime thanks and regards

 

[Sunil Kumar Bajaj]

Dear Sir
I tried the bhajan while taking Chord C# major as follow if you find ok please give your approval.

G#F C#C#C# C -A# D#D#D#D#
Shiv Pooja mein Man leen rahe
CD#. GGG. F D#C#. FFFF
Mera. Mastak ho aur dwar Tera
FG# C+C+ C+A#G#G A#A#A#
Mit Jaye. Janmo ki Trishna
C+A# C+G#F# F#F# FD#C# FF
Mile. Bhole. Shanker. Pyar tera
F#D#C#CC#........
Pyar Tera.........

C# G#G# GFD#C FFFF
Yu. Mujhe ko Tera. Pyar Mila
FA#A#A# C+A#G#G A#G#G#G#
Bejan Ko. Jaise. Jaan Mili
FF#. A#A#. A#A#. F#F. A#A#A#
Jis. Din se. Tujh. Ko. Jana Hai
G#C+. C+C+C+. G#G A#G#. G#G#
Mujhe ko Apni. PehChan. Mili
FG#. C+C+C+. A#G#G. A#. A#A#
De Di. Tune. Charno mein. Jagah
C+A#. C+G#F#. F#F#. FD#C#. FF
Abhari. Hoon. Sau. Baar. Tera
F#D#C#CC#............
Sau Baar Tera.....

This is my first ever try to write Notation please ignore and notify me
The mistakes
Thanks &Regards

 

[Sunil Kumar Bajaj]

Dear Sir
The change in Chord is only due to
My comfort zone of Singing the Bhajan where as you have taken the
Original Chord
Thanks

 

[Chandran]

Dear Sunil Kumar,

I am not a scientifically learned person and not that much expert to rectify your notes. I have updated the lyrics you quoted with my notes, please compare and deside yourself which one to follow.